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D&G DOLCE&GABBANA SUNGLASSES DD 6053 BLACK 064/87 [Apparel] by DOLCE & GABBANA
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Are these dolce and gabbana sunglasses gay?
people say that if guys wear D&G sunglasses they are gay or look gay(no offense to anyone) . I came across these sunglasses for men and i want to know if these look gay? or would make me look gay? is it normal for guys to wear D&G sunglasses? D&G http://www.sunglasshut.com/sgh/pdp.jsp?upcs=679420214641 | Read more Are dolce and gabbana shades for men? I have got some D&G sunglasses that have in real big letters on one side saying Dolce and on the other side Gabbana are these for men cause i dont want to wear some girl shades that's embarasing don't get me wrong im no rich boy deffinitly not Gay | Read more Where can I find good "replica" or wholesale designer clothes ? I just don't have $450 to buy one pair of jeans. Most good "replicas" (read:Fakes) or wholesales are decent quality for a fraction of the price, but I cant find a reliable store or website to order from. I'm looking specifically for men's apparel from Dolce&Gabbana or Diesel, as well as D&G Sunglasses. Don't buy fakes....craftsmanship is crappy....and they don't last long. Plus you wouldn't want to wear fake sunglasses...they'll be bad for your eyes, they probably have NO UV protection although it may say it does. Go to an OUTLET!!!!!!!!!!! Not only are the prices GREAT, you also get the REAL DEAL. JC | Read more How's this for an opening to a short story? How can I make it better? “So, what brings someone like you to a place like this?” it was an honest question—it wasn’t exactly normal for someone to be standing all by himself at the Halloween carnival wearing a pair of Dolce & Gabbana sunglasses. He didn’t give an immediate response but gave this wicked smile as if telling him that he didn’t have time to talk to children. Kaffe wasn’t a child, though, he had turned fifteen eight months ago, plus, the other man didn’t seem to be any older than eighteen. After a sip of his Styrofoam covered soda, the mysterious man answered, “I’m a demon here to prey on unsuspecting children as custom on Halloween night. Didn’t you know?” Kaffe grinned and decided to play along, “So, Mr. Demon, having any luck?” “Plenty, I’m like honey to a hive of bees. I just seem to naturally attract them.” Lilith and Football Funkie--yes, they are gay. Sort of. And your right, the last line was a bit odd come to think of it. I still want the natural attraction thing in, just probably need a new analogy. Thanks. Like I said in your other question, take it from a creative writing student--I think this is a great introduction! In the first paragraph, you immediately establish where we are and who we're dealing with, even characterizing by mentioning the type of sunglasses he was wearing. I think it's an excellent intro. However, I'm a bit of a grammar nazi. "Kaffe grinned[...]luck?" should have its own paragraph because it is the dialogue of a different character. Also, the first paragraph seems to be a run on sentence. I do this too, and what I usually do when I'm editing is go back and split up a few of those run-ons into seperate sentences. A better example might be, "[...]place like this?' It was an honest question. It wasn't exactly[...]" etc. Also, there seems to be a bit of a contradiction in the second and third paragraphs. The mysterious man is described as not having the time to talk to children, then he says he is a demon whose purpose is to prey on those very children. It seems like you did this to introduce Kaffe's age, and you can still do that. It just takes a bit of cutting and pasting and editing the grammar to make it flow. My idea to add in Kaffe's age is to have the mysterious man speak to him in a condescending tone as if he was talking to a child--feel free to use it or not, I know I might be kind of overstepping my boundaries here: "He didn't immediately respond, but gave this wicked smile. After taking a sip of soda from his styrofoam cup, the mysterious man answered, "I'm a demon here to prey on unsuspecting children as custom on Halloween night. Didn't you know?" He spoke in a condescending tone as if speaking with a small child. Kaffe wasn't a child, though. He had turned fifteen eight months ago; plus, the other man didn't seem to be any older than eighteen." I'm not sure if that would work or not because only you know the demon's character and whether or not the condescending tone would fit him. It's only my suggestion, and if it isn't my place to do so, I apologize! I can get a little carried away with "suggestions" and end up rewriting someone's story for them, so I'm sorry if I'm overstepping my boundaries! I absolutely LOVE the last line of the intro you provided. It just makes you think, "Oh, crap, Kaffe just fell right into this guy's trap!" It would be even more effective if you added something after like, "The man's sinister grin widened" or something similar that way we get the idea (if this is where you're planning to go with the story, that is). I also agree with Chelsea and My Name Doesn't Fit Here, except on one account: make your story as long as you want it to be whether it's just a few pages, thirty pages, or a full length novel. It doesn't really matter how long it is as long as there isn't fluff or unnecessary 'stuff' in it. It's much better to just write until you feel you're done with the story than limit yourself while writing and say, "No, this has to be five pages!" If you want it to be a certain length, go back and edit it--but don't edit yourself while you're writing because it won't turn out as good. One thing my creative writing teacher pounds into our heads is stream of conciousness--write everything and THEN go back and edit it. Don't edit as you go along. Again, I'm sorry if it wasn't my place to make those suggestions or if you were offended at all. I think it's a great start to what will probably be a great story--I can't wait to read more! White Knight | Read more |
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